| Post 1 | New | Posted January 28th, 2005 |
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| Meklo | Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :. 
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| Post 2 | New | Posted January 28th, 2005 |
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| Gokhan Would you like to know more? 
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| Post 3 | New | Posted January 28th, 2005 |
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| mahjqa Something shiny! 
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| Post 4 | New | Posted January 28th, 2005 |
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| Maindrian Anti-Hero Deluxe 
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| Post 5 | New | Posted January 28th, 2005 |
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| JRS21 I too, drink English tea. 
| Keep up the good work, but you need MUCH darker shadows, the back windscreen is too blurry, not enough darkness in there, the highlight is too light. Moreover, the windscreen highlight and the lack of detail within the windscreen makes it look like a black plastic screen, no window or anything. If the hump behind the cockpit is to be say as high as the back of the seat, you need much darker shadows and I believe it may suit better if you make the rear window more angled, and therefore the hump too, much more like an F1 car. Try and make the central bit at the front go to more of a point like the Enzo, and reform the lights, I don't think they suit. All very negative I know, but you can't scrap this...keep going. ------------------  Britannia rules the waves. American navy is full of gays. We win. |
| Post 6 | New | Posted January 28th, 2005 |
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| Faze Introverted Destruction 
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| Post 7 | New | Posted January 29th, 2005 |
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| Alfadog beats eating it 
| I wanna know, where's the engine! ------------------  |
| Post 8 | New | Posted January 29th, 2005 |
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| Meklo | Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :.
| Alfa: The engine is rear mounted. John: I know there isnt much detail in the windows, but they are just something I fixed up quickly. Yes, I will make the rear end a little more shadowy and probably do something else with the lights. Everyone else: Thanks for the comments  ------------------ I see infinite constraints only bound by their conception ::.. . . . |
| Post 9 | New | Posted January 29th, 2005 |
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| Gokhan Would you like to know more?
| I meant RIGHT mirror from our POV, not the left by the way, but great car nonetheless  ------------------ GOKHAN |
| Post 10 | New | Posted January 29th, 2005 |
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| Meklo | Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :.
| Yes it does. Thanks Gokhan. ------------------ I see infinite constraints only bound by their conception ::.. . . . |
| Post 11 | New | Posted January 29th, 2005 |
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| tarmac President of G! Forums 
| Very nice indeed! :y Looks like a crossover between a F1, Le Mans, TVR Tuscan and Ferrari F60  ------------------  |
| Post 12 | New | Posted January 29th, 2005 |
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| Alfadog beats eating it
| Meklo wrote: Alfa: The engine is rear mounted. There's not much room there mate! P.S. I love - LOVE - the mirrors. ------------------ |
| Post 13 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005. Updated January 30th, 2005 |
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| RunYaSneakers does this thing work? 
| Yeah, you should move the roof forward a bit more and bring the rear window forward too sort of like the 90's MR-2. ------------------  |
| Post 14 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005 |
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| 2na Beans, eating it!
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| Post 15 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005 |
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| ameer cunt smasher! 
| Don't finish it. Delete it. And set your computer aflame. Lookin' good. ------------------   |
| Post 16 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005 |
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| Meklo | Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :.
| *sets computer on fire* Thanks for all the comments Alfa: How the hell is there no room? The whole rear end is engine space! ------------------ I see infinite constraints only bound by their conception ::.. . . . |
| Post 17 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005 |
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| Alfadog beats eating it
| Ahh, I looked at the car more carefully and err... ok. I think it's just not to scale. Originally I had thought the whole black bit was the windscreen, and that the car had a roof. I think if you put this in GTA it will look odd as his head will be too big. Eh.. it's very weird. I dont "get" the shape. ------------------ |
| Post 18 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005 |
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| GtAkReYz (^_^) /
| Alfa, your monitor is probably too dark to show the driver's seat... I think you're right about the scale though, the driver's area might be a tad too thin. All in all a very nice car, my main problem would be the front end. Those headlights are ugly IMO, you should try something different there. Also, the "bumper", so to speak, is lighter than the rest of the bonnet, which looks really odd because it seems like it's a completely different, separate part of the car. I think the bonnet shading is well executed, so you should darken the "bumper" until the transition isn't noticed. The shadow of the roof, on the right side, should be darker, and probably wider, it doesn't seem raised enough. I've just noticed another oddity, the roof seems to be as high as the back-most part of the bonnet, due to the continuation of the shadow on both sides of the roof until it reaches the bonnet (and a bit further). Perhaps that shadow should vanish towards the front, ending somewhere along the driver's area, I think. Finally, the shading on both wheelarches isn't very good. I can see how hard that must be to get right, but there's something about it that just doesn't work for me. Perhaps the highlights are too long, I don't know. It's a really minor thing though, but if you could improve that, I think it would help... ------------------ Closed for study. HAHA, last year! Then, off I go to work... Not anymore, hell yeah, I design buildings now. And Malls. ------------------  //my GTA cars |
| Post 19 | New | Posted January 30th, 2005 |
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| Meklo | Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :.
| Thanks for the advice. I will try to rectify the problems - I know what you mean about the wings! And yes, the cockpit is a little too small. ------------------ I see infinite constraints only bound by their conception ::.. . . . |
| Post 20 | New | Posted February 2nd, 2005 |
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| Meklo | Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :.
| Here is an Update. More comments please Attached File: The file has been deleted. ------------------ I see infinite constraints only bound by their conception ::.. . . . |