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Big Sexy
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Hi,

Got another car, the TVR Sagaris. Same old story, need feedback, blah, blah

http://storm.elxx.net/fiftyspence/tvr.png

Thanks,
Bryan

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Meklo
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Maybe make the back area 1 or 2 pixels smaller or better still, just make the bonnet a few pixels longer. Other than that, it's a nice if a little confusing (because of all them details). Decent effort!

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    *Sneaks out of the Newbie Lurking Room*

    The front end of the Sagaris seems rather round, your version seems somewhat pointed...
    The headlights are wrong, they go more along the sides, yours go more along the front...
    The front fender vents are shaped like boomerangs, yours seem to look like straight lines...
    The center bonnet vents of your version look as if they go up and out instead of down and in...
    The bonnet vent next to the windscreen is clearly visible from a top down view, you've completely omitted it in your version...
    The roof scoop on your version seems to be angled, might want to straighten that...
    The side windows extend to about a third or halfway back alongside of the rear window, yours stop AT the rear window...
    The rear window has rounded corners, yours is rather squarish (is that a word?) looking...
    The spoiler i've seen in most pictures is simply a clear plastic piece of something so you might want to forego that in your version to save the rearend...
    The rearend is shaped wrong, it has funky corners and your version seems rounded...
    The close lines around the bonnet vents are missing from your version, not that it's really important I guess...
    and the front bonnet should be a bit longer as well.

    Other than that it looks good so far.

    *Runs back to the Newbie Lurking Room*  PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!
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    Big Sexy
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    Hurt you?

    My god that is excellent feedback, thank you very much!

    I've taken doth your ideas into consideration, the bonnet is now longer, the headlights are being redone, the spoiler is changed, the side windows are fixed, the missing vent had been added and the side vents are being redone.

    I'll preview it again later but thats again guys!

    Bryan

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    Meklo
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    Oh, also, the roof is darker than the bonnet - depth problems.
    The side windows are little black holes... dont like them.

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