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Posted July 11th, 2005
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    		This is my first attempt at a car. Window highlights modified by JJHW. (I <3 you)

    Suggestions and comments before I make the deltas?

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    Posted July 11th, 2005
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    Yeah, look pretty good, should smooth out the bonnet though, looks too jaggy atm, good for your second car!

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    Posted July 11th, 2005
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    		Second car or not, smooth the whole bastard out!
    When you leave it all jagged it looses all flow

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    Posted July 11th, 2005
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    		You know I think it looks really cool, something different for starters and it has a lot of detail for a 2nd attempt at a car.

    My only criticism is that its to long, is it the same car that?s in mafia? If so it looks more like a limo then a 4 door sedan.

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    Posted July 11th, 2005
    Azz
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    		I think it's bloody good.

    A valiant attempt at an angled bonnet like that, I know a lot of car making vets who still can't get that right. Like Needles said it's still a little jagged, but the highlight is nice and smooth.

    For future cars I'd strongly suggest working in another colour such as blue or red, something reasonably saturated. Hue/sat shifting to silver is easy, shifting away without messing it up is damned near impossible.

    But yeah, nice work.

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    Posted July 12th, 2005
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      		Thanks for the comments.

      This is the car from Mafia, and I'm afraid it only comes in silver, in real life and in the game yes

      Maybe you're right about the size, it's a bit long..

      JJHW smoothed out the hood a bit, and I added a back bumper. (but this was before you all replied, heh)

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      Posted July 13th, 2005
      Meklo
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      		You need to make the bumpers look like chrome instead of Grey lines. Also, the windshield looks a little too jaggy and should be more rounded. Otherwise it's a cool attempt. Nice. :D

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      Posted July 13th, 2005
      Faze
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      		The vehicle itself is rather impressive for a first attempt. The thing looks a bit wide though.

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