Azz the barbarian. grrr
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| yeah. Looks crap.
heh, just kidding. Looks uneven, both at the front and the back. The right pink bump is too big for the left part, I suggest either making the central part of the bonnet wider or tweaking the white highlighton the left.
Backside just needs to be darker on the right of the window to match the strong highlight on the left.
Front window looks a little angular around the bottom, not so much on the right I suppose, but the left side under the flare seems to come up at 45degrees where as the right is an arc.
Roof highlight it nice and the shading works.
Perhaps you could try brightening the headlights slightly, just a couple of flecks of light. Just something to add interest as it seems to drift away at the front.
Am I looking at the same car?. If so I'd tweak the shape of your headlights too since yours are quite wide and flat, the real thing is narrow and tall, ish.
Only other thing I'd do is adjust the side windows, at the moment yours are pretty much huge vacuums for the eye. If you either brought them in one pixel, making the border of red down each side 2 wide instead of 1, or changes the black/grey window edging to be deep red, then you'd have smaller windows and it'd give the car a more substantial look.
Just a few thoughts. ------------------ azz.gouranga.com est. 1998 (I am oldskoolier than joo) |
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