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Take THAT John tongue

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Yeah, got bored and John showed me his Gallardo, thought I'd make it's 'counterpart'.

For the record, I'm a Lamborghini person and I'll be taking great joy in the crash deltas :).

Little bit of an experiment with the GTA2-style rear window flare, but I thought it suited it far more than a normal one... It looks GREAT ingame :).

And I'm having great trouble getting depth into the back...

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Very nice - though is the front of the windscreen that flat on the real thing?
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It'd look stupid any other way tongue

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    Image didnt load! no
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    JJHW
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    Elxx's hosting is down...

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      Damn I cant even imagine how a F430 would look in top down 2d!
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      Needles spilled beer on the server again. Sorry about that.

      Reupload your pic, it apparently got error'd the first time. Then it'll load.
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      Azz
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      why don't you just attach the image to your post in the board?  It's not bigger than 2 meg is it?

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      It's there now you weirdos! Now, comment!

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      *ahem*

      "The image ?storm.elxx.net/Aero/F430_wip.png? cannot be displayed, because it contains errors."

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      HAha, okay, I'll re-upload :P.

      Working now?

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      yeah. Looks crap.


      heh, just kidding. Looks uneven, both at the front and the back. The right pink bump is too big for the left part, I suggest either making the central part of the bonnet wider or tweaking the white highlighton the left.

      Backside just needs to be darker on the right of the window to match the strong highlight on the left.

      Front window looks a little angular around the bottom, not so much on the right I suppose, but the left side under the flare seems to come up at 45degrees where as the right is an arc.

      Roof highlight it nice and the shading works.

      Perhaps you could try brightening the headlights slightly, just a couple of flecks of light. Just something to add interest as it seems to drift away at the front.

      Am I looking at the same car?. If so I'd tweak the shape of your headlights too since yours are quite wide and flat, the real thing is narrow and tall, ish.

      Only other thing I'd do is adjust the side windows, at the moment yours are pretty much huge vacuums for the eye. If you either brought them in one pixel, making the border of red down each side 2 wide instead of 1, or changes the black/grey window edging to be deep red, then you'd have smaller windows and it'd give the car a more substantial look.

      Just a few thoughts.

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      Meklo
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      I think that back left is WAY to dark. It needs to have some lighting going on there. Also, what happenedn to your glassy looking windows dude? The front looks a little squished too. Otherwise, I'd agree with Azz. :D

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