Return to index
Page: 1, 2, 3
Printable Version Abbreviations
GOURANGA! Forums > Editing > 3D Mods > Neural FGT
Post 1 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
Back on the modeling trip, with another Neural concept car, still very early stage:

http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_early1.jpg
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_early2.jpg
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_early3.jpg
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_early4.jpg

It doesn't really look good right now, as I haven't done anything on the normals yet and I'm still experimenting with the shape, but you can see where it's heading to. The concept is an FR transaxle GT style car. The old Neural wheels are just there for experimenting reasons, they're gonna be replaced. Polycount is 1300 right now.


------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 2 | New
Will
Shovel Headed Kill Machine

Will's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 3,473
Nice shape going there... I must get back to the Lada, but college is overloading me. Grr. I'll do it, not much to do anyway.

Just thinking wheel wise... what about something really sharp and edgey for it? Like a blade design?

------------------
-My site got deleted-

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/5379/gold20lm.jpg

http://www.boomspeed.com/egraphics/yow90.gif
Post 3 | New
Azz
the barbarian. grrr

Azz's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 1,785
  • Type: Administrator
Looking good.

Do you do all your modelling in zmod, Frag? I'm still having issues getting smooth normals, I think I'm destined to never make a smooth looking car. Damnit.

------------------
azz.gouranga.com
est. 1998
(I am oldskoolier than joo)
Post 4 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
yes, everything in Zmod...normals can be quite an ass to do there...it's always quite a lot of work to get them right, mainly detaching parts, reuniting some vertices, and recalculating, but it works quite good,as you can see on my other cars, I haven't done anything on the normals of this one, I want the get the shape finished first. Cars with a rather clean mesh in flat shading mode need quite less normal work in Zmod.

------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 5 | New
JJHW
JJHW's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 1,058
Needs proper Neural headlights...

------------------
http://storm.elxx.net/Aero/Ombase.jpg


Long live the first 20 members! - I'm number 15 *duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhuhuuuhuhuhuhuhhhuuh*
Post 6 | New
2na
Beans, eating it!

  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: -97,249
Dammit that's one sexy looking Neural.

------------------
I hope you like me and I fit in with your life.
Post 7 | New
JJHW
JJHW's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 1,058
Hmmm, the front is quite Ford GT reminiscent...

------------------
http://storm.elxx.net/Aero/Ombase.jpg


Long live the first 20 members! - I'm number 15 *duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhuhuuuhuhuhuhuhhhuuh*
Post 8 | New
Meklo
| Dwi'n Yma O Hyd | :.

Meklo's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 680
JJHW wrote:
Hmmm, the front is quite Ford GT reminiscent...


That's exactly what I thought... the rear kinda reminds me of a corvette too. :D

------------------
I see infinite constraints only bound by their conception ::.. .  .   .
Post 9 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
Some more pics, fitted some backlights, adjusted some normals and added a bit of colour, sideskirts and the back diffusor.

http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_green1.jpg
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_green2.jpg

JJHW wrote:
Needs proper Neural headlights...

Got Any idea? Explain how they should look!

------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 10 | New
Cerbera
Ben 'Cerbera' Millard

Cerbera's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 1,800
I think the bonnet ridge is far too sharp; it seems to meet the bonnet with just a single atom.

The windscreen seems to curve too far back.  An enourmous amount of bodywork will need to move with the door to allow the player inside.  I don't think the windscreen should go right out to the edge of the vehicle because it makes the front area far too big for an exotic vehicle.  The windscreen seems to go too high.  It's not in proportion to the rest of the car, imho.

I really like the nose, the front fenders and the swoopy sides.   Reminds me a lot of the 1967 Corvette Stingray I set up for GTAVC ages ago. smile

------------------
My Grand Theft Auto Handling Editor
My GTA Tutorials
http://projectcerbera.com/button.png
Post 11 | New
JJHW
JJHW's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 1,058
A bit like the Lotus Elise's headlights...

------------------
http://storm.elxx.net/Aero/Ombase.jpg


Long live the first 20 members! - I'm number 15 *duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhuhuuuhuhuhuhuhhhuuh*
Post 12 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
Restyled headlights:
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_green4.jpg
I first tried something Lotus Elise style, but they somehow didn't really fit the car, so I tried this instead.

Cerbera wrote:
The windscreen seems to go too high.(...)

http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_green3.jpg
You're right on that one, I increased the size of the roof to make it a bit less high. I'm also not sure if I'll do the big Neural style gullwing doors again or if I should seperate the two big glasses into a moving and a fixed part each.

EDIT: lol, just realized that this was my 1337th post.

------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 13 | New
Alfadog
beats eating it

Alfadog's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 3,065,928
  • Type: Moderator
Just 1 idea - to make the shape nicer, you could move the arch of the wheel arch at the back forward a little. Keep the lines more parallel. Also, I feel you can make more use of the whole split windscreen theme. You can do some really awesome things with it. Check out the GTA1 Neurals to get ideas if you want. I like eccentuating the rear arch shape with the window as shown in my pic. I also smoothed the corner between window and the front pillar. Make it a little faster looking. Now, I don't know how easy that is to do in your 3d program but it's just an idea. I love what you did with the bonnet. My preference wuold have it sharper around the sides - I have this idea in my head - but I think that's probably way too hard to model. is there anything you can do with the great big square holes inthe bumper? Really lets the car down atm imo

And you know what would be cool? If the rear glass went down to the front of the spoiler, and there was just a grille kinda thing on the back between the spoiler and body - like on your previous neurals. Keep another design element.. Well, it might look good.. just that from here it seems as though the rear glass will have to be awfully steep to join with the body. Hmmm, I guess it's probably front engined too. So the grille thing would be pointless. COuld do glass a la CRX, or just dismiss my idea all together :D

OK, enough ! Hope you understand what I meant.

Attached File:
The file has been deleted.



------------------
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii288/lidm/grandJDMsig_03.jpg
Post 14 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
wow...so many constructive ideas, thanks for that, Alfa, and for the effort of making a photoshop pic. I tried to take into consideration what you said, it now looks like this, and I'm quite happy with it:
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_green5.jpg

the Alfa wrote:
is there anything you can do with the great big square holes inthe bumper?

My original thought was to fit the Neuralite "N" grille into the center hole and standard grills into the left and right, so that you can see the radiators behind. But the holes seem to lack a bit of aggression right now, I've got to think about them a bit longer.
I guess it's the changed headlights that make them seem out of place, the holes fit the style of the GT40ish headlights better.

------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 15 | New
Cerbera
Ben 'Cerbera' Millard

Cerbera's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 1,800
Perhaps using a wider "snout" on the bonnet would improve the design?  The Panoz Esperante has something better, imho.  There isn't really space in your car for a decent size of engine in the front because the intakes are so far back. smile

Because you have those big intakes on top of the bonnet, you don't really need any in the front bumper.  You could drop the nose down lower, a bit like the Panoz does?

Perhaps using headlights a bit more like the TVR Speed 12 would work?


The new shape looks very good.  I think the rear window pillars should be a bit narrower so the rear window doesn't need to be as steep on the outside edges.  There should be some exit vents behind the front wheel arches, imho.

------------------
My Grand Theft Auto Handling Editor
My GTA Tutorials
http://projectcerbera.com/button.png
Post 16 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
Cerbera wrote:
Perhaps using a wider "snout" on the bonnet would improve the design?  The Panoz Esperante has something better, imho.  There isn't really space in your car for a decent size of engine in the front because the intakes are so far back. smile
The V12 from the first Neural fits without problems. As this is supposed to be a transaxle configuration, which means front engine and gearbox attached to the rear axle, there should be enough room.  

Cerbera wrote:
Because you have those big intakes on top of the bonnet, you don't really need any in the front bumper.  You could drop the nose down lower, a bit like the Panoz does?
The bonnet intakes are supposed to be a ram air intake into the engine, the ones in the front bumper were meant to be for the radiators. But I'm not to happy with the look of it right now, I guess I will rework quite a lot there.

Cerbera wrote:
Perhaps using headlights a bit more like the TVR Speed 12 would work?
I thought about making them this way, but it would only work if the front wheel arches were steeper, with this rather flat angle, they'd be hidden quite deep in the body.

Cerbera wrote:
The new shape looks very good.  I think the rear window pillars should be a bit narrower so the rear window doesn't need to be as steep on the outside edges.  

Thanks. I've got some ideas for the rear window on my mind, but I have to build them before I decide which one I'll use.

Cerbera wrote:
There should be some exit vents behind the front wheel arches, imho.

Good point. That would add some spice to the sides. They're definitely coming.

------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 17 | New
Alfadog
beats eating it

Alfadog's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 3,065,928
  • Type: Moderator
Wow Frag, the changes look fantastic, well done!

Can' t wait to see more tweaks :) So far this is the best looking Neurally car you've made yet. Well IMO anyway!

------------------
http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii288/lidm/grandJDMsig_03.jpg
Post 18 | New
Will
Shovel Headed Kill Machine

Will's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 3,473
This is great looking!

Perhaps though with the front lights, just rake them back a bit if you can, or put them under little idvidual glass domes... hard to explain, like a small cover bit between the light and the bottom of the recessed bit where it sits. Just smooth it off a bit.

Love the shape of it.

------------------
-My site got deleted-

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/5379/gold20lm.jpg

http://www.boomspeed.com/egraphics/yow90.gif
Post 19 | New
Fragdieb2
Avatar is missing!

Fragdieb2's Avatar


  • Joined: Mar '03
  • Posts: 1,784
total nose restyle (the 4th attempt):
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_nose1.jpg
http://storm.elxx.net/fragdieb/fgt_nose2.jpg

Sexy?

------------------
-temporary placeholder for a new cool signature-
Post 20 | New
Will
Shovel Headed Kill Machine

Will's Avatar


  • Joined: Feb '03
  • Posts: 3,473
Much, much, better. The headlights work with that front end now. I likes it.

------------------
-My site got deleted-

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/5379/gold20lm.jpg

http://www.boomspeed.com/egraphics/yow90.gif
Page: 1, 2, 3
Printable Version Abbreviations
IceyBoard 1.6.2 © 2002-12 Icey